MLA In-Text Citations: Parenthetical and Narrative

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An MLA in-text citation tells your reader exactly where in a source a quotation, paraphrase, or idea came from, and points them to the matching entry on your Works Cited page. MLA 9th edition gives you two ways to place that citation: parenthetical, where the source information sits in parentheses at the end of the sentence, and narrative, where you work the author's name into your own sentence. Knowing when to use each one is the difference between prose that flows and prose that stutters. This guide covers both forms, the core author-page format, and every common situation that complicates it, from sources with no author to sources with no page numbers.

Quick answer: An MLA in-text citation normally gives the author's last name and a page number, with no comma between them: (Hollis 42). In a parenthetical citation, both go in parentheses at the end of the sentence. In a narrative citation, you name the author in your sentence and put only the page number in parentheses: Hollis argues the opposite (42). Every in-text citation must match the first element of a Works Cited entry, which in MLA is usually the author's last name. If there is no author, you use a shortened version of the title instead. If there are no page numbers, you give the author alone.


This article is the in-text companion to our complete guide to MLA style, which covers the container system, Works Cited, and formatting at a higher level. For the parent overview of all major styles, see our overview of citation styles.


The Core Format: Author and Page Number

The standard MLA in-text citation has two parts: the author's last name and the page number where the material appears. MLA puts no comma between them and no abbreviation before the page number. The citation is "(Hollis 42)," not "(Hollis, 42)" and not "(Hollis, p. 42)." That spacing is one of the most common things an editor corrects in a humanities manuscript, because writers coming from APA habitually add the comma.


The reason MLA leads with the page number rather than a date is rooted in the humanities. A literature scholar arguing about a specific passage needs the reader to find that exact passage and verify the reading. The page number is what makes close reading checkable. Our MLA style guide explains this rationale in more depth, but the practical point for in-text citations is simple: the page number is doing real work, so it belongs in nearly every citation where one exists.


The in-text citation is deliberately minimal because it is only a pointer. It gives the reader just enough to locate the full source on the Works Cited page, where the complete publication details live. The first word of the in-text citation, usually the author's last name, must match the first word of the matching Works Cited entry, so a reader can move from one to the other without friction. If your in-text citation says "(Hollis 42)," your Works Cited page must have an entry that begins "Hollis."


Parenthetical Citations

A parenthetical citation places all of the source information in parentheses, usually at the end of the sentence, before the closing period. You use it when you have not named the author in your own sentence. This is the default form, and it keeps your prose clean when the identity of the author is not the point you are making.


Consider a paraphrase. You are summarizing an argument and you want the reader to know where it came from, but you do not need to foreground who made it:


The novel's structure deliberately withholds the narrator's name until the final chapter, forcing the reader to reconsider every earlier judgment (Hollis 117).


The same applies to a direct quotation where the author's name is not part of your sentence:


The narrator insists that memory is "a kind of editing, not a recording" (Hollis 89).


Notice the placement: the parenthetical citation comes after the closing quotation mark but before the sentence's final period. The period that ends the sentence goes outside the parentheses. This is true for paraphrases and short quotations alike. The only exception is the block quotation, covered below, where the period comes first.


Narrative Citations

A narrative citation works the author's name into the sentence itself, leaving only the page number for the parentheses. You use it when the author is part of what you are saying, when you are attributing a claim, comparing scholars, or tracing an argument to its source.


When you name the author in your sentence, you do not repeat the name in the parentheses. That would be redundant. You give the page number alone:


Hollis argues that the novel's central irony is structural rather than verbal (117).


The page number still appears at the end of the sentence, in parentheses, before the period. The reader gets the author's name from your prose and the location from the parentheses, and together they point to the Works Cited entry exactly as a parenthetical citation would.


Narrative citations are the better choice when the source matters as a source. If you are setting one critic against another, naming them in your sentences makes the disagreement legible: "Hollis reads the ending as redemptive (212), while Okafor finds it deliberately hollow (54)." Two narrative citations in a single sentence do work that two parenthetical citations could not do as gracefully.


When to Use Each Form

The choice between parenthetical and narrative is a choice about emphasis, and good academic prose uses both. The question to ask is whether the author is part of your point or just the source of it.


Use a narrative citation when the author is part of your point. That covers several situations: attributing a specific claim to a specific scholar, comparing or contrasting sources, tracing the development of an idea across critics, or treating the authority of the source as part of your argument. Naming the author in your sentence foregrounds the human making the claim.


Use a parenthetical citation when the author is not the point: when you are establishing a fact, summarizing background, or supporting your own argument with evidence whose specific source is less important than its content. The parentheses keep the source information out of the way of your prose.


A paper written entirely in one form reads poorly. All-parenthetical prose feels evasive, as though the writer is reluctant to engage with scholars by name. All-narrative prose feels like a list of names, slowing every sentence with an attribution. Strong humanities writing alternates between them based on what each sentence is doing, and this is one of the things a professional editor watches for when reviewing a literature manuscript.


Multiple Authors

MLA handles multiple authors in the in-text citation the same way it handles them on the Works Cited page, scaled down.


For a source with two authors, name both, joined by "and": (Mendez and Royce 88). In a narrative citation, the same: "Mendez and Royce demonstrate that the manuscript was revised twice (88)."


For a source with three or more authors, give the first author's last name followed by "et al.," the Latin abbreviation for "and others": (Mendez et al. 88). Note the period after "al" but not after "et," because "et" is a complete word and "al." is the abbreviation. The full rules for this abbreviation across MLA, APA, and Chicago are covered in our guide on how to use et al. in citations.


No Author

When a source has no named author, your in-text citation uses a shortened version of the title, because the title is what begins the Works Cited entry. The shortened title must start with the word by which the entry is alphabetized, so the reader can find it.


Put the shortened title in quotation marks if the full title is in quotation marks on your Works Cited page, such as an article, a short story, or a web page. Use italics if the full title is italicized, such as a book, a journal, or a website. So an article becomes ("Unsigned Review" 12), and a book becomes (Norton Anthology 1450). Keep the shortened title short, usually the first noun phrase, and make sure it begins with the same word the full entry begins with.


No Page Numbers

Many sources have no page numbers: web pages, e-books with reflowable text, films, and many digital materials. MLA's rule is straightforward. If there are no page numbers, you give the author's name alone and do not invent a location.


Do not use the page numbers your e-reader displays. Those numbers change with font size and device, so they are not stable references and another reader cannot rely on them. A citation of an unpaginated web article is simply (Okafor), or, narratively, "Okafor argues" with no parenthetical at all if the name is already in your sentence and there is no other locator to add.


If the source provides another kind of stable numbered division, you may use it. Many classic plays and poems use line numbers, and many scholarly editions use numbered paragraphs or sections. When you use one of these, name it the first time so the reader knows what the number refers to: (Shakespeare, lines 12 to 15) or (Mbeki, par. 4). For a source with explicitly numbered paragraphs, MLA uses "par." or "pars." For a source with no numbering of any kind, the author's name alone is correct and complete.


Multiple Works by the Same Author

If your Works Cited page includes more than one work by the same author, the author's name alone is no longer enough to point the reader to the right entry. You add a shortened title to distinguish them.


The parenthetical form gives the author's last name, a comma, the shortened title, and the page number: (Hollis, Memory and Form 117) and (Hollis, "Reading the Ending" 4). Here MLA does use a comma, between the name and the title, because without it the citation would be ambiguous. In a narrative citation, where the name is already in your sentence, you give the shortened title and page: Hollis makes the opposite case in her earlier essay ("Reading the Ending" 4).


Corporate and Organizational Authors

When the author is an organization rather than a person, you use the organization's name in the in-text citation. If the name is long, you may shorten it to the first noun phrase, but it must still begin with the word the Works Cited entry begins with. A government report might be cited as (Modern Language Association 9) on first use. MLA permits shortening a long corporate name in later citations once the reader can clearly connect it to the full entry.


Indirect Sources: Quoting a Quotation

Sometimes you want to quote something that you found quoted inside another source, an interview excerpt reprinted in a critical study, for example. Whenever possible, find and cite the original. When you genuinely cannot, MLA lets you cite the indirect source using the abbreviation "qtd. in," meaning "quoted in."


You name the original speaker in your sentence and point the parentheses at the source where you actually found the quotation: As the author later admitted, the ending was "written three times and never finished" (qtd. in Hollis 230). The Works Cited entry is for Hollis, the source you actually read, not for the original interview you did not. This keeps your Works Cited honest about what you actually consulted.


Citing Multiple Sources at Once

When a single point is supported by more than one source, you can place both in one parenthetical citation, separated by a semicolon: (Hollis 117; Okafor 54). This is useful when you are establishing that a reading is widely shared, or that several critics converge on the same conclusion. Keep these multi-source citations short. A parenthetical packed with five sources interrupts your prose more than it helps. If you find yourself needing to cite many sources for one point, that is often a sign the discussion belongs in your main text or a note rather than compressed into parentheses.


Block Quotations

MLA formats a prose quotation longer than four lines as a block quotation: started on a new line, indented half an inch from the left margin, and presented without quotation marks. For poetry, the threshold is three or more lines of verse. The in-text citation rule changes in one important way for block quotations.


In a block quotation, the parenthetical citation comes after the final period, not before it. This is the reverse of the rule for quotations run into your text. The closing punctuation of the block quotation ends the quoted material, and the citation follows it. For the half-inch indentation mechanics and how to set block quotations in Microsoft Word, see our guide on MLA formatting.


Before and After: An Edited Example

Here is a passage with the in-text citation errors an editor most often finds in humanities drafts, followed by the corrected version.


Before: Many critics have noted the novel's unreliable narration (Hollis, p. 42). As Okafor argues, the ending resists closure (Okafor 54). The narrator describes memory as "a kind of editing" (Hollis, 89) which supports this reading (Hollis 89).

After: Many critics have noted the novel's unreliable narration (Hollis 42). As Okafor argues, the ending resists closure (54). The narrator describes memory as "a kind of editing" (Hollis 89), a description that supports this reading.


Four corrections happened here. The "p." was removed from the first citation, because MLA does not use it. The redundant name was dropped from the Okafor citation, because Okafor was already named in the sentence, making it a narrative citation that needs only the page number. The comma was removed from "(Hollis, 89)." And the doubled citation of the same page was consolidated, because citing "(Hollis 89)" twice for one quotation and its discussion is repetitive: one citation covers the quotation and the sentence that uses it.


The Five Most Common MLA In-Text Mistakes

  1. Adding a comma between author and page. MLA is "(Hollis 42)," with a space and no comma. The comma is an APA habit. This is the single most frequent MLA in-text error in manuscripts from writers who also use APA.
  2. Writing "p." or "pg." before the page number. MLA gives the page number alone. "(Hollis p. 42)" should be "(Hollis 42)."
  3. Repeating the author's name in a narrative citation. If you named the author in your sentence, the parentheses get the page number only. "Hollis argues X (Hollis 42)" should be "Hollis argues X (42)."
  4. Inventing page numbers for unpaginated sources. If a web page or reflowable e-book has no stable page numbers, give the author's name alone. Do not use the page number your e-reader happens to display.
  5. Mismatching the in-text citation and the Works Cited entry. The first word of your in-text citation must be the first word of the matching Works Cited entry. If your citation says "(Hollis 42)," the entry must begin "Hollis," not "Margaret Hollis."

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Frequently Asked Questions

What is the difference between a parenthetical and a narrative MLA citation?

A parenthetical citation places all the source information in parentheses at the end of the sentence, as in (Hollis 42), and is used when you have not named the author in your own sentence. A narrative citation works the author's name into your sentence and leaves only the page number for the parentheses, as in "Hollis argues the opposite (42)." Both point to the same Works Cited entry. The choice is one of emphasis: use a narrative citation when the author is part of your point, such as when attributing a claim or comparing scholars, and a parenthetical citation when the source supports your point but its specific author is not the focus.


Does MLA use a comma between the author and the page number?

No. An MLA in-text citation places the author's last name and the page number with only a space between them and no comma, as in (Hollis 42). MLA also does not use "p." or "pg." before the page number. The comma between author and page is an APA convention, and adding it in MLA is one of the most common errors made by writers who use both styles. The one situation where MLA does add a comma is when you cite multiple works by the same author and need a shortened title, as in (Hollis, Memory and Form 117), where the comma separates the name from the title.


How do I cite a source with no page numbers in MLA?

If a source has no page numbers, such as a web page or a reflowable e-book, give the author's name alone in the in-text citation and do not invent a location. Do not use the page numbers your e-reader displays, because those change with font size and device and are not stable references. If the source provides another kind of stable numbered division, such as line numbers in a poem or numbered paragraphs in a scholarly edition, you may use it, naming it the first time so the reader knows what the number refers to, as in (Mbeki, par. 4). For a source with no numbering of any kind, the author's name alone is correct and complete.


How do I cite a source with no author in MLA?

When a source has no named author, use a shortened version of the title in the in-text citation, because the title is what begins the Works Cited entry. The shortened title must start with the word by which the entry is alphabetized so the reader can find it. Put the shortened title in quotation marks if the full title is in quotation marks on your Works Cited page, such as an article or web page, and in italics if the full title is italicized, such as a book or website. For example, an unsigned article might be cited as ("Unsigned Review" 12) and a book as (Norton Anthology 1450). Keep the shortened title to the first noun phrase.


How do I cite a source with multiple authors in MLA?

For a source with two authors, name both joined by "and," as in (Mendez and Royce 88). For a source with three or more authors, give the first author's last name followed by "et al.," the Latin abbreviation for "and others," as in (Mendez et al. 88). There is a period after "al" but not after "et," because "et" is a complete word and "al." is the abbreviation. These forms mirror how the same sources appear on the Works Cited page, scaled down to the author and page number.


How do I cite two works by the same author in MLA?

When your Works Cited page includes more than one work by the same author, the author's name alone cannot point the reader to the right entry, so you add a shortened title. The parenthetical form gives the author's last name, a comma, the shortened title, and the page number, as in (Hollis, Memory and Form 117) and (Hollis, "Reading the Ending" 4). This is one of the few MLA in-text situations that uses a comma, because without it the citation would be ambiguous. In a narrative citation, where the name is already in your sentence, you give only the shortened title and page number.


How do I cite a quotation I found in another source?

When you quote material that you found quoted inside another source, MLA prefers that you find and cite the original whenever possible. When you genuinely cannot, you cite the indirect source using the abbreviation "qtd. in," meaning "quoted in." You name the original speaker in your sentence and point the parentheses at the source where you actually found the quotation, as in (qtd. in Hollis 230). The Works Cited entry is for the source you actually read, not for the original you did not consult. This keeps your Works Cited page honest about which sources you genuinely used.


Where does the citation go in an MLA block quotation?

MLA formats a prose quotation longer than four lines, or a verse quotation of three or more lines, as a block quotation, indented half an inch from the left margin and presented without quotation marks. In a block quotation, the parenthetical citation comes after the final period, not before it. This is the reverse of the rule for quotations run into your own text, where the citation comes before the sentence's closing period. The closing punctuation ends the quoted material, and the citation follows it.


Can I cite more than one source in a single MLA citation?

Yes. When a single point is supported by more than one source, you can place both in one parenthetical citation, separated by a semicolon, as in (Hollis 117; Okafor 54). This is useful when you are showing that a reading is widely shared or that several critics reach the same conclusion. Keep multi-source citations short, since a parenthetical packed with many sources interrupts your prose more than it helps. If you find you need to cite many sources for one point, that material often belongs in your main text or a note rather than compressed into parentheses.


Do MLA in-text citations have to match the Works Cited page?

Yes, and this is the rule that makes the whole system work. The first word of every in-text citation must be the first word of the matching Works Cited entry, so a reader can move from one to the other without friction. In most cases that first word is the author's last name, but for a source with no author it is the first word of the shortened title. If your in-text citation says (Hollis 42), your Works Cited page must have an entry that begins "Hollis." Mismatches between in-text citations and Works Cited entries are a common error in long documents, and they are one of the things a professional editor checks across a full manuscript.


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